Thứ Bảy, 4 tháng 12, 2010

CAUSE AND EFFECT ESSAYS 2


Topic: what makes a successful student life?
It is believed that college time is the most beautiful time in life and having success creates this beautiful time.In my opinion, there are two main factors that make a successful student life.
     Firstly, to have a successful student life, students should study seriously.  This means we should spend as much time as possible for studying so that we can get much knowledge as we can. we need to always do the homework enough and prepare carefully for every new lesson. This will certainly help us easily understand and remember the lessons, get the best result or even get scholarship. Moreover, the methods we use are very important, too. Using the right way, study smarter not harder helps students be successful a lot. To save the time, we should study right away in class time, take notes important things to remember easier. We need to manage the time to balance between studies and relax effectively. Students should join some interesting clubs where we can both study and relax such as: English club, soft skill club, making friends club…As we can see, studying is a very important duty for every student in college time to have a successful student life.
Another reason that makes a successful student life is creates unforgettable memories by willingly dedicate for society by doing social work. Because most of students are all full of energy young people so that we should help people by what we have. And remember giving is receiving. We can also learn a lot from doing social work. We can learn to be more confident and active; especially we know how to sympathize with people needed help. There are plenty of helpful activities for students such as: help the poor, take care of the old, visit disable children….Doing social work is a good way to get successful student life.



2 nhận xét:

  1. hichic.for me it is hard to write this type of essay. i can not think of a conclusion.

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  2. Language: sympathize with people needed help

    Conclusion: What can you learn from poiting out the causes of something happening?

    More discussion about what is a successful student life needed.

    Specific details but you need to relate to the key words in the topic sentence. For example: how does thí idea relate to your key word "serious": Students should join some interesting clubs where we can both study and relax such as: English club, soft skill club, making friends club…

    MARK:7.8 (no conclusion)

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